The Satirical Theater of the Female Body:
The Role of Women in Martin Amiss The Rachel Papers,
Dead Babies, and Money: A Suicide Note

Part 2
The Rachel Papers
To understand better the characterization of women in these three
novels by Martin Amis, we can turn to a discussion of his first text, The Rachel Papers.
The novel yields many themes that resonate throughout all of Amiss later work: the
mediation of identity and sexuality, the effect of male misogyny on women, and a
satirically comic analysis of morally bankrupt characters debased by materialism and
commodity culture. In The Rachel Papers, Amis begins his critical examination of
modern sexuality by satirizing the mediated sexual behavior of Charles Highway.
Amiss satire is not limited to a comic critique of his protagonist, however. Amis
uses Charles Highways sexist behavior as a way to address his larger literary
concernsi.e., for establishing a literary dialogue with past writers on the issue of
sexuality.
This pattern of dialogue can be illuminated by Harold Blooms
theories of literary influence. James Diedrick has pointed out the presence of
Blooms "anxiety of influence" in Amiss writing with respect to the
rivalrous relationship between Amis and his father, Kingsley Amis. "In terms of
Blooms theory, the proximity and intensity of his fathers influence have led
him to seek a series of father substitutes whose influence he can acknowledge without
filial conflict" (6). In this search for father substitutes, Amis seems to be
rigorously engaged in "creative misreadings," enabling us to illuminate his work
through Blooms second revisionary ratio, tessera: "A poet antithetically
completes his precursor, by so reading the parent-poem as to retain its terms
but to mean them in another sense, as though the precursor had failed to go far
enough" (Bloom in Richter 709). The principle of tessera is present in
Amiss preoccupation with the mediation of sexual behavior: the follies and sexual
corruption of Charles Highway become Amiss philosophical challenge to the romantic
idealism of writers such as D.H. Lawrence. Indeed, Amis situates sexuality between the
tensions of the contemporary world and the age of Romanticism and Lawrentian sexuality:
Its part of a genuine idea about modern lifethat its so mediated
that authentic experience is much harder to find. Authentic everything is much harder to
find. In all sorts of behavior, even in the sack, were thinking, How does this
measure up? How will this look? Weve all got this idea of what it should be
likefrom movies, from pornography. Im interested in two extremes. The first is
the idea that the earth moves, this great union is formed, and the self is lost. That
comes from D.H. Lawrence and Romantic poetry and is what we all devoutly hope for. The
other extreme is sort of athleticthe hot lay, where the self is in fact not lost in
the moment but is masterful and dominant. And that comes at us from another
directionfrom advertising and pornography and trash fiction. (Morrison 101)
Charles Highway symbolizes this mediation of modern life: his intense
self-consciousness (as particularly regards the seduction of women) throughout the novel
reveals that there is hardly anything about him that is authentic. For instance, Charles
"outlines" his bedroom in anticipation of his evening with Gloria:
The room wouldnt, after all, need much preparation for
Gloriarecord-sleeves scattered negligently about the room, certain low-brow
paperbacks displayed advantageously on table and desk, and the colour supplements, open at
suitable pages, on the floor. Gloria probably had no fixed conception of me so there
wasnt much point in going into detail. (Amis 16)
In his attempts to impress and seduce women, Charles represents a
youth caught in a postmodern world where identity has become another commodity to exploit:
"In my room I looked out my Rachel note-pad in preparation for the telephone
call. I flicked through it making notes, underlining the odd pertinent phrase, sketching
personas" (33). Indeed, the self becomes an article of clothing that is valued only
for representation, when Charles prepares for his encounter with Rachel:
What clothes would I wear? Blue mandras shirt, black boots, and the old black cord
suit with those touching leather elbow-patches. What persona would I wear? On the two
occasions I had seen her last August I underwent several complete
identity-reorganizations, settling finally somewhere between the pained, laconic,
inscrutable type and the knowing, garrulous, cynical, laugh a minute, yet something
demonic about him, something nihilistic, muted death-wish type. Revamp those, or start
again? (42)
Identity, with Charles and his late-twentieth-century environment, has become
commodified: people no longer possess innate or developed characteristics but are
"types" that purchase personality in a marketplace of ideological
self-fashioning.
This extreme of mediated behavior, then, conflicts dramatically with
the romantic notions of self-effacement through sexual experience. Amis effectively
employs his use of dramatic monologue in order to articulate this antagonism. As noted by
James Diedrick, the use of this narrative technique is one of Amiss key
accomplishments in the novel, for it allows Amis to comment on his characters and on
literature in general without interfering with his characters thoughts (Diedrick
31). Amis uses this technique during Charless foreplay with Rachel to speak through
his character and pose a challenge to D.H. Lawrences romantic interpretation of
sexuality: "Had the time come to orchestrate the Lawrentiana?" (151). Charles
discovers rather quickly, though, that the self will not find transcendence through
passion:
How nice to be able to say: We made love, and slept. Only it wasnt
like that; it didnt happen that way. The evidence is before me...I know what
its supposed to be like, Ive read my Lawrence. I know also what I felt and
thought; I know what that evening was: an aggregate of pleasureless detail, nothing more;
an insane, gruelling, blow-by-blow obstacle course. And yet thats what Im
here for tonight. I must be true to myself. Oh God, I thought this was going to be
fun. It isnt. Im sweating here. Im afraid. (152; my emphasis)
In a novel dealing with the comic and disturbing aspects of mediated
behavior, Amiss intention here is to debunk the lofty idealism of Lawrence and
expose sexuality under the influence of intense self-consciousness. He has Charles
announce this challenge to Lawrences idealism, signifying the presence of tessera:
Amis is acknowledging Lawrences preoccupation with and interpretation of sexuality,
but extends and redefines its meaning by rewriting sexuality under the influence of
mediation in the postmodern age. Amis presents this redefinition by satirizing the
mechanical aspects of Charless sexual encounters:
It wasnt that bad, as I remember, not significantly worse than usual.
Fifteen, maybe twenty minutes trying not to come, with a beady dread of what was going to
happen when I did; a decent (i.e. perceptible) orgasm; a further two or three minutes in
garrotted detumescence. Cock attains regulation minimum and is supplanted by
well-manicured thumb; Gloria has another...five? orgasms; and so it ends. (19)
There is no great union or Lawrentian "connection" found
in Charless sex with Gloria: instead of romantic self-effacement through
intercourse, there is intense self-concentration and anxiety. Amis also carefully chooses
his language to articulate the tired, mediated machinery of sex: the body struggles in a
timed process, its parts operating mechanically ("regulation minimum").
Sexuality, then, becomes a banal act of performance for the self: "I recall turning
at one point from the section of wallpaper I was perusing to check on Glorias face
(just for the files): and impressively atavistic it was too" (21). Charless
ironic study of the wall debunks the notion of communicative sex, while his inspection of
Glorias face becomes a marker of status for the self.
In the process of dialoguing with and critiquing this Lawrentian and
Romantic view of sexuality, Amis uses his female characters to foreground his thematic
concern with mediation. The above satirized description of Charless foreplay is
effective only by having Rachel presented as a "blow-by-by obstacle course" that
captures Charless stumbling mediated behavior. To continue his deconstruction of
Lawrentian sexuality, Amis casts Gloria as a voyeuristic spectacle in order to provide
Charles with the voice he needs to revise the interpretation of sexual experience:
During the long pre-copulative session I glanced downwardsand what should I
see but Gloria, practising the perversion known as fellatio. Unaccountably, she was doing
this with great rigour and enthusiasm, circling her head so that her long plush hair
skimmed and glided over my hips, thighs and stomach. Visually, it was most appealing, but
all I could feel was a remote, irrelevant numbnessplus, in my legs, cramps and
pins-and-needles respectively. Have I come already, perhaps? I asked myself. (20-1)
In this passage Gloria functions as a vessel through which the
mediated sexual concerns of the novel can be revealed: the visual spectacle of her
"rigorous" sexual behavior serves to construct a titillating image of expected
erotic play that evaporates with the painful sensations registered by Charles. In this
way, Gloria becomes a subjugated textual object, isolated in a pornographic image, that
carries the greater significance of allowing male experience to speak and debunk the
illusion of sexual pleasure.
However, Amiss intention in The Rachel Papers is not
simply to rewrite ideas about sexuality. Before his characterization of women can be
further critiqued, his approach to sexuality must be thoroughly understood. Amis presents
the reader with a comic manifesto in The Rachel Papers, clarifying his interest in
scabrous sexual activity: "Surely, nice things are dull, and nasty things are funny.
The nastier a thing is, the funnier it gets" (87). Amis seems to define humor as a
way to satirize the moments of sexual and moral corruption of society: while using
laughter to punish the degeneracy of his characters, Amis also uses comedy to cope with
the nasty realities of domestic violence, sexual aggression, and the proliferation of
sexually transmitted diseases that ooze their way across the pages of his texts. Indeed,
Amis has admitted that the type of humor in which he is interested is one that embraces
the painful situations of life: "What I am interested in is heavy comedy, rather than
light comedy. Its a wincing laughter, or a sort of funky laughter...Sort of a
hung-over laughter, where it hurts" (Morrison 97). Comedy, then, in the case of The
Rachel Papers, is employed as a means of punishing the corruption of Charles, while
also serving as a kind of lubricator for what Amis sees as the nasty realities of modern
societyas a "method of confronting often-repressed truths, of using humor to
gain a critical leverage on them" (Diedrick 14). A clear example of this
"wincing" humor is Charless recollection of his sexual experience at the
Belsize Park flat:
It ended one mid-August morning when I happened to glance down at the undulating
area between my stomach and the stomach of a girl I just so happened to be poking at the
time (in a sweaty, hungover state, I might add). What I saw there were worms of
dirtas when a working man, his day done, strides home rubbing his toil-hardened
hands together, causing the excess grit to wriggle up into tiny black strings, which he
soon brushes impatiently from his palms. Only these were on our stomachs and therefore
much bigger: like baby eels. (13)
The graphic imagery is purposefully used to criticize the
misogynistic and inebriated sexuality that is characteristic of Charles Highway: it is a
way to laugh at and feel disgust for his behavior. A more effective moment where Amis uses
laughter to deal with Charless sexual degeneracy follows his coupling with Pepita
Manehian:
However, on the following Friday or thereabouts I woke up to find that someone had
squeezed a family-size tube of pus all over my pyjama bottoms. A toxic wet dream? On
visiting the bathroom I found also that I was peeing lava. Palpably, something was up. To
deal with the first symptom I fixed up a sort of nozzle over my helmet with a wad of
Kleenex and an elastic band. To ameliorate the second, I took care always to use the
narrow downstairs lavatory, where, with palms pressed flat against the walls, like Samson
between the pillars of the Philistine temple, I would part company with angry half-pints
of piss, pus, bloodyou name it. (90)
The comic elements of these scenes serve to attack the promiscuity
of Charles, using laughter to confront the painful consequences of his (mis)use of
sexuality. Amiss puritanical intention behind this critique of sexuality becomes
evident when he brackets the discussion of Charless sexually transmitted diseases
with the satirists disapproval: "This be Natures way of recommending
monogamy" (89). Thus, despite the undeveloped claim of Shanti Padhi that
"Repulsiveness and grossness are the main elements of Martin Amiss humour"
(Padhi 40), Amis does have a set purpose to his brutal and explicit treatment of
sexuality. Contrary to Padhi, Amiss early works are not simply "The
scatological pranks of a young writer trying with utmost panache to outdo his rivals in
porno-peddling" (Padhi 36), since Amiss wider vision seems to be to relish in
his use of language and imagery in order to expose the decay of a postlapsarian modern
world.
Charles Highway is the first of many misogynists to strut his way
through the pages of Amiss fiction. Charles holds stereotypical views of women,
mocks their bodies, and willfully plots their seduction without regard to their feelings.
More central to the novels main theme, he uses literature to satiate his sexual
desires: "Because I really quite liked Blakeand not just for the fucks he had
got me, either" (73). Amis has stated his distaste for Charles, remarking that
"Charles is a crude case of someone who tries to turn literature to his own
advantageusing Blake, for example, to seduce girls" (Haffenden 10). Amis
presents Charless misogyny in varying degrees: "Ran into Jenny on the front
doorstep. She was on her way out to have lunch with a friend. I didnt think girls
did that sort of thing nowadays, and said so. Jenny laughed vivaciously, but looked not at
ease" (33). More cruel than Charless ignorant views of women, though, is his
treatment of women during sex: "Of course: I had never used a sheath before. With
those girls who werent self-contracepting I had practised coitus interruptus,
practising it all over their stomachs or in between the sheet and their bums, depending on
locale and whether or not I liked them" (155).
Based upon this behavior, Amis is able to express Charless
sexual corruption by drawing a symbolic parallel between Charless sexuality and the
bathroom. After discovering two adolescent memoirs stapled together in his files,
describing the appropriate behavior of turds and his desire to have sex with an Older
Woman, Charles says: "I free the staple with my fingernails and marry the two items
with a paperclip, instead. I dont think they can be that closely
connected" (88; original emphasis). The irony Amis invests in this scene reveals that
the memoirs share a crucial similarity. The juxtaposition of the two items suggests how
Charles has confused sexuality with defecation, divesting sexual intercourse of its
communicative potential and transforming it into a process of expelling bodily fluids
because of his selfish and emotionless pursuit of women.
While rendering Charless misogyny and degenerative use of
sexuality, however, Amis spends little time developing his female characters. Even though The
Rachel Papers is a portrait of the sexual behavior of the late 1960s, Amiss
satire in the novel can be best described as being specifically concerned with male
uses and abuses of sexuality. Amis continues to express the degeneracy of Charless
desires for women, by using language to depict his sexual behavior as a kind of bowel
movement: "Thoughcome ondid I really want to show her the other side, my
place? Dionysian bathroom sex: troop in, tug back the covers, go through the gaping
routine, do everything either of you can conceiveably think of doing, again, lurch lick
squat squirt squelch, again, until its all over, again. No. And she probably
wouldnt let me" (180). But while expressing this metaphorical connection
between Charless sexuality and the bathroom, Amis is lightly concerned with the
characterization of women: "Made the girl mine in a lavatory at some weekend party.
(All the bedrooms were occupied; but it was quite a spacious closet, with a rug, some
towels, and tissues a plenty.) We did well, even though, in the dying moments, Pepi
smashed her head three times against the lavatory bowl, this giving the cramped
cleaning-up operations a still more incongruous air" (89-90). The main focus of the
passage is to capture Charless debased sexuality by symbolically placing this
encounter in the bathroom. The physical condition of Pepita, though, seems only to help
construct the debasement of the scene: there is no indication of her consciousness as a
character, except that her abused body adds a comic air to this situation.
James Diedrick suggests that some of the mischievous sexual antics
of this novel are purposeful: "While the novel can be read as a (male) adolescent
coming-of-age story, it can just as easily be taken as a parody of the
genre..." (30). But even when Amis parodies these sexual activities (as suggested by
the tone and style of listing sexual positions quoted below), the female body stages the
incident:
Here we go. An old-school repertoire of minimally sexy positions. Examples: I slung
her legs over my shoulder; knelt, bending her almost triple; lay straight as an ironing
board; turned her round, did it from behind, did it from the side; I brought my right leg
up, kept my left leg straightI did the hokey-pokey, in fact. But, again, it is
change of position that is sexy, not the position itself, and God forbid that I should
feel sexy. (161)
Rachel becomes an extremely elastic, pliable object that is
"slung and bent," and twisted about in order to characterize Charless
behavior. The manipulations of her body are presented as a comic dance"the
hokey-pokey"to evoke parodic laughter at and satirical commentary on the male
protagonist. In these moments of parodying sexuality, Amis even seems to become seduced by
what he is critiquing and lose his satirical focus: "Tonight, my lad, you are going
to get laid. Selfishly. Youre going to get gobbled for a kick-off. You gonna bugger
her good. You gonna rip out her hair in fistfuls, fuck her like a javelin hurled across
ice, zoom through the air, screaming" (187-8). Even though Amis is seemingly
attempting to satirize the narcissistic behavior of Charles in the scene, his intention
fails precisely because of the violent antifeminist imagery that is employed in order to
comment on Charles. If the passage is meant to ridicule Charles, it is done so by
violently abusing the female body.
Amiss failure to maintain a satirical distance from his
characters actions continues immediately after this fantasy of Charless. When
Charles lies in bed with Rachel, Amis seems to describe the scene so as to illuminate the
misogyny that arises from Charless selfish actions: "If you can slash in my bed
(I thought) dont tell me you cant suck my cock. So I drive it into her cheek,
practically up her nose, and Rachel takes it in her mouth and releases it almost at once.
With a croak of disgust...And yet I was the one who felt ashamed, dirty, dog-like, in the
wrong. To prove it there were tears on her face when I came up for air" (189).
Charless behavior is shown to be completely dehumanizing towards Rachel as signalled
by the tears on her face. But the added descriptions of Charless efforts to force
fellatio seem to be tinged with the overtones of comedy, which detract from the satirical
sentiments present in the passage.
Even though one of the goals of The Rachel Papers is to
perform a satiric comedy and criticize the idea of the "hot lay" ("where
the self is in fact not lost in the moment but is masterful and dominant" [Morrison
101]), Amis again stages this humor on a thoroughly objectified female body. Noting this
complicated nature of Amiss satire in the text, James Diedrick states: "In The
Rachel Papers, it is not always clear where Amis stands in relation to his
narrator" (31). This satirical ambiguity suggests that Amiss questionable use
of the female body represents the presence of authorial antifeminism that resonates within
the attempted satirical sketches of Charless sexuality.
Finally, on a more subtextual level, the use of women to foreground
male behavior finds expression in Rachels relationship to Charles. Rachel is hardly
a fully developed character; indeed, her main role is to be a sexual object, to function,
in the words of James Diedrick, "at least in part as a fantasy-projection of
Charless own upwardly mobile aspirations (her first name is a virtual anagram of his
own)" (24). As I have shown, however, Rachel plays a more significant rolethat
of a narrative vehicle that drives Charles "Highway" to maturity in this
coming-of-age novel. The deeper concerns of The Rachel Papers is Charless
search for a resolution with his philandering father, Gordon Highwayan observation
also made by James Diedrick: "Significantly, and despite the novels focus on
his pursuit of Rachel, Charless relationship with his father forms the emotional
center of the novel" (26).
What has not been acknowledged, however, is how the pursuit of
Rachel structures and resolves this greater patriarchal concern of the text.
In her study "Desire in Narrative," Teresa de Lauretis ruminates on this
question of the feminine giving voice to male desire in narration. She states that
feminist theory must perform a rereading of the "sacred texts" on narrative
theory, and cites Roland Barthess interest in language, narrative, and the Oedipus
as the factors that produce the informing logic of male desire in narrative development:
"Pleasure and meaning move along the triple track he first outlined, and the tracking
is from the point of view of Oedipus, so to speak, its movement is that of a masculine
desire" (de Lauretis 107). Amiss narrative places Charles in the role of
Oedipus, a character who is travelling through his experiences in search of an emotional
resolution with his father. And the character who provides the "road" on which
to construct these travels is Rachel. Rachel and Charless father, then, are not
separate concerns of the novel; rather, she serves to inform and provide the landscape in
which Charles can act out and think about the grievances against his father.
The truer significance of Rachels character can be found in de
Lauretiss reconsideration of the feminine in Oedipal narrative structures:
"Medusa and the Sphinx, like other ancient monsters, have survived inscribed in hero
narratives, in someone elses story, not their own; so they are figures or markers of
positionsplaces and topoithrough which the hero and his story move to their
destination and to accomplish meaning" (109). Rachel, like Medusa and the Sphinx,
fulfills this role of the "marker of positions" by adding form to Charless
narrative perusal of his childhood. Charles "rigorously clerks" his adolescent
files, because he (like Oedipus) is out on a quest: "Because something has definitely
happened to me, and Im very keen to know what it is" (4).
What Charles stumbles upon in the opening of this narrative is the
question of his "absent" father: "Its strange; although my father is
probably the most fully documented character in my files, he doesnt merit a note-pad
to himself, let alone a folder...Why nothing for my father? Is this a way of getting back
at him?" (8). After this point, Charless encounters with Rachel throughout the
text are tellingly juxtaposed with thoughts for his father. Immediately after Rachel
surprises Charles at the Notting Hill Gate Smithsalmost forcing him to speak
without his usual mediated self-consciousnessCharles writes: "I think it was
that afternoon I began work on the Letter to My Father, a project which was to take up
many a spare moment over the following weeks" (66). Furthermore, after Charles
narrowly escapes receiving a beating from Derek at the tutors, he announces:
"Patently, I was in a state about something. Not so much about Rachelfor I was
cockfree until the end of next week, so nothing dramatic could happen. Perhaps it was the
idea of having some sort of showdown with my father" (121). In these scenes, Rachel
marks the development of Charless destination: she is the current that washes
Charles through his narrative to articulate his real internal struggle with his father.
Ultimately, this relationship with Rachel allows Charles to achieve
meaning, which he has been looking for during the narrative perusal of his past. In the
last section of the novel "Midnight: coming of age," Charles desultorily
prepares for his appointment at Oxford, "fumbling with clothes and Interview
literature" (209). Curiously, though, Charles chooses a different guide to help him:
"On an impulse, I decided to take The Rachel Papers with me, instead" (209).
This decision can be understood from the fact that Rachel symbolizes Charless
younger, mediated self: she is the space of the text through which Charles has stumbled,
tripping over his elaborate plottings and seductions that have only deluded himself. His
own commentary on his relationship with Rachel reveals this self-delusion: "I tried
writing letters to Rachel but although elegant and conscientious they made no sense to me
and I merely filed them away. I seemed incapable of using words without stylizing
myself" (144).
His interactions with Rachel give voice to his central
problemhow he has selfishly used words and literature consistently to seduce women
and inflate his ego. Thus, carrying The Rachel Papers into the interview signifies how
Rachel has carried Charles to his textual correctivei.e., the debunking of his
stylized self he receives at the hands of the Oxford professor, punningly named Dr. Knowd:
"...Literature has a kind of life of its own, you know. You cant just use
it...ruthlessly, for your own ends...Just read the poems and work out whether you like
them, and why" (215). Knowd delivers this knowledge to Charles, urging him to be
himself, to find authenticity. He serves as a kind of father figure, giving Charles the
parental guidance he has been lacking throughout his narrative, according to Amis:
"The only come-uppance he [Charles] gets is from the university tutor who interviews
him towards the end. Reading the book again after five years I saw with pleased surprise
that the tutor was an author-figure, because all my other books have author-figures. He
scolds Charles for his misuse of literature" (Haffenden 10).
Thus, no longer possessing the mediated self that was identified
with Rachel, Charles loses interest in their relationship, and finds symbolic
reconciliation with his father: "I return to the wastepaper basket and find
Rachels mascara-ed ball beneath the layers of tissue steeped in my own snot and
tears. I examine it, then let it fall noiselessly from my hand. I cover it now with the
Letter to My Father" (222-3; my emphasis). The supplanting of her tissue with the
letter implies how Rachel has foregrounded the patriarchal conflict of father and son.
Rachel is not separable from Charless issues with his father:
she provides the obstacle for Charles to overcome in order to receive his come-uppance and
gain a new consciousness. She is thus the textual stumbling block that provides meaning
for Charless story, fulfilling the de Lauretian role of the feminine in male
narratives: "They are obstacles man encounters on the path of life, on his way to
manhood, wisdom, and power; they must be slain or defeated so that he can go forward to
fulfill his destinyand his story. Thus we dont know, his story doesnt
tell, what became of the Sphinx after the encounter with Oedipus..." (de Lauretis
110). While Charles progresses toward the achievement of manhood, Rachel suffers the same
fate as the Sphinx: the reader never learns more about the ambiguous state of her possible
pregnancy; she is simply whisked away by her former boyfriend, Deforest, leaving a
slightly altered Charles Highway at the end of the novel.